STORY
Once upon a time, there was a giraffe named Geraldine. Geraldine had a lot of big brown spots, and one very tiny one, her lucky spot. Geraldine was short for a giraffe, nobody knew why, she just was.
One summer Geraldine decided that she wanted to go on vacation. But, she didn't know where to go. She looked at last years summer travel report for advice.
After searching frantically for hours, Geraldine found out that Salt Lake City, Utah was a wonderful place!
POEM
Bears are big.
Bears are strong.
Bears are scary.
Bears are hairy.
ALLITERATION
Bonnie borrows big, better than best books.
Well, Drew, Mary, Tessa, Greta, Joslyn, Jazlyn, Liberty, Jonas, and Keni did you like it? I made it just for you!
Well, Drew, Mary, Tessa, Greta, Joslyn, Jazlyn, Liberty, Jonas, and Keni did you like it? I made it just for you!
5 comments:
Greta loved it! Tessa cheered--she wants to be a cool story-writer like you when she grows up.
"Den, den!" (Again, again!)
"Den, den!" (Again, again!)
"Den, den!" (Again, again!)
I love your writing! Keep up the good work kiddo! :)
Post a Comment